千钟醉此心只为谁

余笙发表于 2025-4-25 21:55

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鸣谦发表于 2025-4-26 06:22

江月年年望相似，不知江月待何人。

打假打小人 发表于 2025-4-26 08:23

写得好，这情感我能理解

余笙发表于 2025-4-26 08:25

打假打小人发表于 2025-4-26 08:23
写得好，这情感我能理解

好吃的不是拉面 发表于 2025-4-26 08:39

好！！！！！！！！！！！

余笙发表于 2025-4-26 08:42

好吃的不是拉面发表于 2025-4-26 08:39
好！！！！！！！！！！！

尼莫的表哥 发表于 2025-4-26 09:09

为什么不能坦诚相待，漏个脸吧

余笙发表于 2025-4-26 09:10

尼莫的表哥发表于 2025-4-26 09:09
为什么不能坦诚相待，漏个脸吧

怕把表哥吓跑

wlrvbc 发表于 2025-4-26 09:14

婀娜多姿俏女子一枚

紫川小楼 发表于 2025-4-26 09:35

此词以数字为骨，以四季为脉，将文人雅事化为情丝万缕。可佐三杯淡酒，伴半窗寒梅，轻吟这今人承古意写新愁之调。

余笙发表于 2025-4-26 09:38

紫川小楼发表于 2025-4-26 09:35
此词以数字为骨，以四季为脉，将文人雅事化为情丝万缕。可佐三杯淡酒，伴半窗寒梅，轻吟这今人承古意写新愁 ...

你的评语如妙笔绘卷，以数字筑骨、四季为脉，将雅事化情丝。三杯酒、半窗梅的意象，勾勒出古今交融的品词意境，清雅隽秀，引人遐思。

烟台or 发表于 2025-4-26 09:43

余笙发表于 2025-4-26 09:10
怕把表哥吓跑

应该让表哥先漏

余笙发表于 2025-4-26 09:44

烟台or 发表于 2025-4-26 09:43
应该让表哥先漏

同意

一花一世界yt 发表于 2025-4-26 10:22

我一肚子话不会评论，只能说好！！！！！！

毒刺发表于 2025-4-26 10:32

好！！！！！！！！！

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